Nicely done. I wish they had done something like this on the show, but if they had, then I wouldn't be able to applaud you for coming up with it.
She handed it to him with her lip snared between her teeth.
It's this kind of style that makes your writing such a joy to read. I can literally *see* this image of Bones in my head. Your use of words is phenomenally right on.
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Date: 2010-02-24 02:13 am (UTC)She handed it to him with her lip snared between her teeth.
It's this kind of style that makes your writing such a joy to read. I can literally *see* this image of Bones in my head. Your use of words is phenomenally right on.