http://only-more-love.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] only-more-love.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] doc_3 2008-10-09 11:41 am (UTC)

Ha! I bet it kills an otherwise good story. It seems like something PARKER might say to a girl, rather than something an adult would ask another adult.

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